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PostSubject: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Thu Jul 16, 2009 3:33 pm

Name: Torment

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Village: Rain

Rank: Anbu (S-Rank)

Height: 6'3

Weight: 202

Elements: Smoke, Combustion, Fire, Water, Wood

Summons: Bears, Wolverines, and Bats

Bio: Torment has always been a sick and twisted person ever since he was little, torturing animals and people it is what he found fun. Villagers noticed this behavior the ignored it at first then it keep on getting worse and worse when pets wouldn't come home and your neighbors are afraid to sleep. The eventually turned him into a asylum where doctors could give him what he has been doing to others. Torment gets taken into a two man cell, his room mate is big and dirty and has blisters and scars all over him. The man looks over at him and ask Torment his name, the man being to beg to help him escape this place after hearing he was Torment a fuuma. Torment then place his hand over the man and asked him his ability, Combustion, then torment placed his hand over the man's mouth and Put smoke into his lungs until the man was dead, Make him his first path.

Not to long after Torment escapes from the asylum he begins to train his new ability, not to long after mastering it he trained and trained. After long days and months of training he felt comfortable with his abilities and begin to look for more paths. About a week later he was traveling down a dirt road in the lightning country when he was ambushed by one very large fellow and one small guy. The big then started to attack us and then the little guy had traps place around us already. The big guy was using fire style and the other one was using water style. Torment use his Path to defeat both of them it was not an easy task torment was almost beat. Then torment acquires his third and fourth path.

After having four paths with room for two more Torment wanted unique abilities he heard about a rare element user he had to meet. He traveled to the land of fire were this Person lives, Out in the far end of the fire country reach there was a hut were a wood user lived. Torment knew that this person would give his life to get revenge on the person who made him that way. The man is after Orochimaru, Torment promised that he would kill Orochimaru if he joined him. The man hesitated none and say do what must be done. Torment then struck the man down and made him his path. Torment then headed back to the Hidden Rain village with no intent after going after Orochimaru. He simply told the man that to inherit his ability to use the wood jutsu.

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Jutsu: Post later

Finisher: Don't Have One Yet

Weapons: Sword, Shinobu Staff, and some kunia

The Shinobu staff is a staff i can tap into to restore my chakra. I have to have alot of chakra to keep my smoke abilities. The staff is mainly used for practice and training. It has a special crystal in it which allows me to store chakra in it for cases where i need to tap in to it. When i am relaxing or not fighting i store almost all my chakra into the staff. Shinobu means endurance.

Abilities: Can control smoke as easy as breathing can also break down his body to be nothing but smoke. Curse of the Oni

Weakness: Wind

Bloodline: Head Fuuma


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PostSubject: Re: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Thu Jul 16, 2009 4:02 pm

I'm guessing you made this before the restart or something.
Any Downsides to your Ability?
More about your staff?

Other than that, Approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Thu Jul 16, 2009 4:32 pm

ok i can do that and yes i have had this for awhile
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PostSubject: Re: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Thu Jul 16, 2009 4:45 pm

Alright, Accepted.

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PostSubject: Re: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:56 pm

Jutsu

Wood Element

Name: Wood Clone Technique

The Wood Clone Technique simply makes up to a few clones made of wood that emerges from the body of the user. These clones can travel far distances from the user and are able to communicate with the original. Another method is that the clones can turn into special pills that if a person eats, he or she can be tracked down due to the pill being able to sense the chakra in the person's body. As long as the pill can sense the chakra

Name: Wood Release Secret Technique: Birth of Dense Woodlands

Forces trees to grow on any surface, and can easily create a dense forest anywhere. This jutsu can also be used to bind an opponent and alter a battlefield for his own uses.

Name: Wood Release: Binding Nest

This technique lets the user summon a tree around their opponent to bind them. This technique is relatively powerful and holds opponents much more gracefully, with less of a strain on the user, because the user sinks them into the ground. Afterwards, the user can enclose the opponent so that their body implodes.

Name: Wood Release: Four Pillars Prison Technique

Unlike Wood Release: Four Pillars House Technique, this jutsu does hold a practical use in combat as it is a quick place to hold captives when there are no available holding cells.

Name: Wood Release: Great Forest Technique

A technique that changes one's own arm into big trees. Using chakra, the tissues are transformed into trees at the cellular level. Then, by activating the trees, stimulating them to grow rapidly, they lengthen at high speed and fork into many branches. It is possible to capture the enemy with these branches and at the same time, if one changes the ends into sharp stakes, turn them into countless, sharp, spear-like piercing weapons.

Name: Wood Release: Transformation

This jutsu is just like any other Transformation Technique. Perform the necessary hand seals, then wood emerges and covers his entire body and a puff of smoke or chakra covers up the transformation. Once the jutsu is done, the transformation is complete. It acts more like a costume than a transformation.

Name: Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall

An extremely versatile move, this technique uses chakra to activate the roots in the ground and, makes wooden pillars appear from left and right. The wooden pillars join together in a dome-shape with you at the center. This process can be used to catch the enemy in a double sided attack. Also, in case one confronts the enemy at a short distance, the enemy can be locked up inside the dome, setting the situation for a one-on-one fight. This dome can also be collapsed or burnt with the enemy inside causing damage. Furthermore, it functions as a easy shelter against the enemy's long-distance attacks, like shuriken and kunai.

Name: Wood Release: Wood Pillar Slam

User makes a pillar of wood come out of the ground and hit the opponent, knocking them backwards. A clone then flips over the pillar and slams his leg into the opponent when they are on the ground


Name: Wood Release: Wood Pole Combo

User creates a thin pole of wood, using it in combat for a weapon.


Name: Wood Release: Wood Projectiles

User shoots three to four sharp stakes of wood at the opponent.


Name: Wood Release: Wood Tendrils

User uses this technique to make some thick tendrils of wood surround him. This can be used to defend against close range attacks or to strike an opponent when they are near you.


Fire:

Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Type: B-rank

Similar to the Fire Release: Flame Bullet technique, this jutsu also produces a combustible material prior to ignition. The user spews superheated ash from the their mouth. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.


Name: Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Type: C-rank

The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object. While the technique is shown in the anime to be even larger and more devastating than Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique (and being able to melt rock), in the manga it is shown to be nothing more than a small burst of flame running along a line of wire.

Name: Fire Release: Mist Covering Technique

After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their
lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.

Name: Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Type: B-rank

The user to fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. The technique appears to require a lot of chakra to use.



Name: Fire Release: Flame Flower

User jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors.

Name: Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Type: C-rank

After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air via their mouth and, utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally (as evidenced by Kakashi Hatake's ability to use the jutsu without burning his mask).

Name: Fire Release: Roaring Flame Sphere

User exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

Name: Fire Release Ninja Art: Running Fire

This jutsu will create jets of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (so far, rings of fire or a circle of fire) before striking the target.


Water:

Daibakufu no Jutsu
[Grand Waterfall Technique]
Suiton Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Suirou no Jutsu
[Water Prison Technique]
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released.


Suirou no Jutsu
[Water Prison Technique]
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released.

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu
[Water Clone Technique]
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. Each clone is 1/10 as powerful as the original shinobi. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.


Mizu no Tatsumaki
[Tornado of Water]
Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock some opponents unconscious.

Name: Water Release: Water Cannon Replica

This jutsu enables the user to control surrounding water and moisture much like Gaara controls his sand. It can be used to block most incoming attacks, bind or drown opponents, and shape the water into various attacks, allowing the user in conjunction with the Summoning Technique to allow water-based summonings to fight in areas that it normally need water to move around by either trapping the target in the same water or maneuvering the water to allow the summing to chase the target. It is able to extract and utilize groundwater, and as is very effective most areas, but useless in rocky areas.

Name: Water Release: Black Rain Technique

This jutsu creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil. This jutsu was first used to burn down Idate Morino's boat, after it was lit with fire.

Name: Water Release: Powerful Blasting Rain Trench

This technique will summon a large amount of water that will then be used to strike at the opponent in several versatile ways.

Name: Water Release: Underwater Motion Technique

This technique allows the user to propel themselves through a body of water by using their chakra. While underwater, this technique will also partially mask their presence.


Suijinheki
[Water Barrier Wall]
Suiton Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.

Suiryuudan no Jutsu
[Water Dragon Projectile Technique]
Suiton Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Other Two elements i am currently working on
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PostSubject: Re: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:09 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Tue Sep 22, 2009 1:19 am

Sorry bro but Wood is a Bloodline Element UNABLED for you. I don't think Smoke is an element too it's more of a ninpou or used in items.

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PostSubject: Re: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Thu Sep 24, 2009 2:55 pm

A wood user is one of my paths. Smoke has been my element for a year now.
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PostSubject: Re: Torment -The Son Of A God-   Fri Sep 25, 2009 1:05 am

Alright, approved.

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